Quiet Reflecting Moments Poem by Fondant Fancy

Quiet Reflecting Moments

Rating: 5.0


Quiet, reflecting moments
when love seems so estranged...
Hiding in the garden
I see the stars ascend.
Overhead, a lark sings
way up high-
I'm laughing
I could never fully
explain
the reasoning behind
my actions-
it would be as
easy as catching a sunbeam...
And as I watched you depart
my heart ceased to live-
the birds overhead,
their cries echoed mine.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajkumar Mukherjee 21 October 2009

Dear Berry, ANOTHER THOUGHT-PROVOKING POEM WITH BEAUTIFUL IMAGERIES AND VISUALS. Just a thought would it sound better if you re-write'I could never fully/explain' as ' I wish I could /explain'.choice is yours. Deserves a perfect 10 from me. Rajkumar

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