Experiencing storm, excited seas
Stir.......... and soon boisterous
Becomes noisily loud.
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Fay, Fay, Fay! I love this poem! it has completely taken over my mind its brilliant and so descriptive, honestly its one of a kind! you leave me breathless! Poetess!
FAY WHEN YOU MENTION WATER OR SEA YOU KNOW I'M THE FIRST ABOARD. THIS IS A GREAT POEM ABOUT DAILY STRESS AND LIFE. THEY BOTH FIT TOGETHER LIKE A GLOVE.
hey this is a cool nice refreshing one indeed.. great one to get away from the complexities of studies.... like a soothing balm for the sore heart! ! ! 10 with love shan
I loved the imagery, and your comparison of the seas to lifes personal emotions and stresses. Ups and downs in other words. Your art is to make such wonderful comparison from something like the cruel sea. Best Steve
Fay - wishing you what you wish others - a safe harbour and still waters! - Michael
Fay, this is just delightful to read...the images enter the mind painting a wonderful scenery......you always manage to create the most beautiful places in the hearts of your readers......simply gorgeous 10+++