Tuesday, April 4, 2006

Ragbag Heart Comments

Rating: 5.0

Beggar lady, in the white mist,
They say you carry a ragbag heart,
hidden inside your rattletrap cart.
I wonder, were you once loved and kissed?
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Mary Naylor
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Sandra Fowler 10 November 2006

You are a keen observer of the human condition. Your compassion becomes you, Mary. Kindest regards, Sandra

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Padraic O' Reilly 11 April 2006

I really, really like this poem. The language used is wonderful. Keep up the good work!

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Esther Leclerc 04 April 2006

I often wonder these same things about the people I see. Everyone is someone... I love this; thank you.

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Duncan Wyllie 04 April 2006

A sad poem that seems to reach out to the poor and poor of heart.You have worked wonders here.Love Duncan

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Mary Naylor

Mary Naylor

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