Rain Poem by Nerissa Morton

Rain



There's that feeling you get when the world around you seems to be falling apart;
That feeling of lonliness;
The feeling as if nothing could go wrong;
That neutral feeling
Yet the world keeps collapsing
Then all of a sudden it rains
The pitter patter of rain on the roof;
The splash of it hitting the ground
When in neutral,
You hear it all
That's when your mood and the atmosphere changes;
Changes from neutral to sadness
All of these held in thought and emotions begin to come out
The link between sadness and rain is phoenominal
Both make you think of falling;
Both seem dark;
Both uncontrollable;
Both can leave you wet
Let it rain once in awhile so you don't stayed parked in neutral forever.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tapas Baidya 25 August 2008

Fine poetic comparison between RAIN and SADNESS. Both wet us. Please read my poems if possible. Thanks. Tapas Baidya, Kolkata, India.

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Nerissa Morton

Nerissa Morton

Tauranga, New Zeland
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