Rain Poem by SarahLouise Malone

Rain

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as i sat there,
in the pouring rain,
my cold, wet feet bare,
i pittied myself, felt my pain.

you left all those months ago,
i cried, you would wince,
i've been wanting you so,
i haven't heard from you since.

my heart is drenched in blood,
my love's source sliced,
if i could change things i would,
i thought it was normal, you were such a feist.

even when you hit me,
silent was i,
a varied series they'd be,
reasons for my black eye

as i sat there,
in the pouring rain,
my cold, wet feet bare,
was i to blame?

our relationship was bold,
just like the rain,
it was recent, transparent, cold,
thinking of this, cold and wet, ashamed.

Sunday, February 8, 2009
Topic(s) of this poem: relationship
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