Friday, January 8, 2010

Rain Comments

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The rain pulls at my insides
Pulls the salt from my eyes
Reminding me of the gloom
Hiding just beyond the sunny skies
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Bri Lynne
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Indira Renganathan 08 January 2010

Rain and pain....interesting depiction...nice poem

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Beena J 08 January 2010

very sad poem good expressions about how the rain reminds the days of past... the good old happy carefree days

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Prashant Shaurya 08 January 2010

a poem riveted with pain.. very well written with some beautiful expressions.. well done.. regards prashant

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