Tuesday, June 2, 2009

Rain Comments

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It was cold that afternoon
Walking, it started to rain
Looking for some shade
But nothing eased the pain
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Arvie Calimlim
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Danzen D. 24 July 2009

A plea of the heart to the rain...a shoulder to cry on...arms to sleep on...a friend to rely on..a love to cherish. The rain is truly a blessing. Nice write! : -)

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Catrina Heart 02 June 2009

Found comfort in the rain......nice expressive poem....Thanks!

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Keshav Prasad 02 June 2009

good write

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