Rain Poem by fugly fool

Rain



Life is like the rain.
One small drop
And then…
It will grow bigger
And bigger
And Bigger
Into a strom in which no one can control! ! !
Then it stops
All is silent
and the remains
Leave the earth wet and fresh
Some may be in mouring
Some lives may be crushed
But the cycle goes on
Drop
Drop
Drop

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Preeti - is here! 04 September 2006

A dropp down poem, I've written a dropp down poem too. It's called 'I wish I Were A Tear Falling From Your Eyes'..but the subject Matter is different from your poem. You've got the poem bang-on, the viscious life is so simply yet impactfully portrayed here, Preets

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Stephanie Smith 07 March 2006

This is a really great poem. It really shows the cycle of life and the world and puts everything into proportion to show that what is happening to you really isn't that bad and it has already happened to many people before you and will continue to happen to many people after you.

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