Saturday, January 1, 2011

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There was a time that I thought you were the one,
You would tell me that everything was alright.
That nothing could take me away from you.
Those sweet soft spoken words I took to heart,
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I could see this like it was a movie. Very good description. Did this really happen to you? Or did it maybe metaphorically happen? Either way it sounds awful, but a very good poem.

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