Rain - She Is Here Poem by Indrajit Chattopadhyay
Rain - She Is Here
Rain is -
Damp mossy wishes
Wet fragrance of memories
Unwritten poems
Dead phone's ringtone
Soaking at a bus stand
Wanton sighs of love
Chatter over wet pillow
Fist-full of tear
Flashes of hope
Dark cloud's love
This was quite good... but I cannot catch the 'She' unless you are talking about rain as she... but if we are talking about the arrival of rain perhaps images of before and after would have carried the poem further. In effect you have a disjointed list. Nice try. Work on it.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/26/2024 2:27:26 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Superbly written..Keep writing.