Wednesday, July 28, 2021

Rain Sings A Song Comments

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May I sit with you and sing a sad song?
A final chorus about what was wrong
Twixt you and I. Oh, it hurts so much
To know I will miss your loving touch.
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Dibya Ranjan Giri
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Luis A. Estable 29 July 2021

You have done a good job here. I admire the perfect rhyme-scheme and the way you went about putting the verses together. It shows mastery of form and poetic diction. Good read.

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