Sunday, May 25, 2008

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My cousin came
but once a year,
to visit and to sleep in
'twas all the same
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Herbert Nehrlich
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Joseph Daly 25 May 2008

Herbert, this is classy. 'in waking say, if we should meet I'll make you scrambled eggs.' Had me in stiches. This is a fantastic use of rhyme. The whole poem s laid out as if it were a modernist piece and yet the poem is traditional in its form. Who cres what the form, it is just a great poem.

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