Thursday, March 15, 2018

Raped At The Time Of Drought Comments

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She walked like a ghost
In the chilling darkness of winter;
Singing to her herself an old lullaby
Her mother had sung years before;
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Anil Kumar Panda
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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

(cont.) otherwise i was somewhat spellbound by this poem. to MyPoemList. and i plan to share it with readers of my November 2018 showcase, in November, featuring poems by poets of the Indian subcontinent. Thanks. i featured such poems last month in my September showcase, which can be found on PH by searching for September 2018. bri ;)

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Anil Kumar Panda 02 October 2018

Thanks very much sir for giving your time and including in September showcase. My gratitude.

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Bri Edwards 30 September 2018

She had thorns in her palms And afraid of squeezing her ... i think add was after And, ...or change to And feared squeezing... i think you meant to use was. ;) (cont.)

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