Rat Race Poem by dipak adhya

Rat Race

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Rat race

My daughter always wants to know
My past
She compares herself with it
When she gets score more than mine
Her joys know no bound

In her seven years
She has defeated me seven hundred times
Yet she wants another win

Another win means another feather
She counts 701,702,703...
I make her remember if she forgets
And then I fear
Of undeniable rat race!

Tuesday, March 19, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: social
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rajnish Manga 19 March 2019

This is all very constructive and positive and in line with current scenario of competitiveness. Thanks a lot.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 19 March 2019

Nice poem reminding that there is no escape from rat race and cut throat competition in this modern age. Thanks for sharing.

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