Saturday, March 8, 2008

Read The Tears Comments

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If my tears could tell a story
They would show you all my joys and my pains
The droplets that I cried, when I was feeling lonely
The ones that fell, when you were to blame
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Deanza L. WalwynBowrin
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Rani Turton 09 April 2008

This is one of the most moving poems i've read. Every teardropp counts! Thanks for putting your feelings down in words.

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Craig Anderson 08 March 2008

'If my tears could tell a story' Enough said. Beautiful thoughts laid down. Isn't it the reason we all picked up a pen in the first place. Our tears alas can not tell the story so we try. Great Piece. Really enjoyed Deanza. Regards. Craig.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 March 2008

The droplets that I cried, when I was feeling lonely..............good musing Truth with insight...good poem

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Deanza L. WalwynBowrin

Deanza L. WalwynBowrin

Toronto, Canada
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