Read The Tears Poem by Deanza L. WalwynBowrin

Read The Tears

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If my tears could tell a story
They would show you all my joys and my pains
The droplets that I cried, when I was feeling lonely
The ones that fell, when you were to blame

So if I stand for nothing I let my tears fall
And when things don’t go my way
They flow down my face, and I cry all in all
Hide myself so my shame I don’t display

When you’re crying alone and things fall apart
Sitting alone with the pen in my hand
It all begins, broken down part from part
I write to set myself free, I write so that I understand.

Saturday, March 8, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: alone,tears
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 09 April 2008

This is one of the most moving poems i've read. Every teardropp counts! Thanks for putting your feelings down in words.

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Craig Anderson 08 March 2008

'If my tears could tell a story' Enough said. Beautiful thoughts laid down. Isn't it the reason we all picked up a pen in the first place. Our tears alas can not tell the story so we try. Great Piece. Really enjoyed Deanza. Regards. Craig.

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Vidyadhar Durgekar 08 March 2008

The droplets that I cried, when I was feeling lonely..............good musing Truth with insight...good poem

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