Friday, November 16, 2012

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Does it ever end?
This overwhelming loneliness
This stormy weather, this hurricane

Tired,
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James Fitzpatrick 02 January 2015

I really like this Katie well done, it flows very well which is an accomplishment in itself. Be proud. Don't stop....

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Kelly Seale 23 November 2012

A thunderstrorm of passion lies within your words Katie... open the door, face-full into the storm... so we may all know the truth. Great ink for one so young... I'm impressed. :) -Kelly.

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Kelly Seale 23 November 2012

A thunderstrorm of passion lies within your words Katie... open the door, face-full into the storm... so we may all know the truth. Great ink for one so young... I'm impressed. :) -Kelly.

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Thyris Taylor 18 November 2012

I feel your pain in this poem. It expresses in my view the pain every day people feel. Those who feel our leaders just don't get it. Great stuff

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Katie Smyth

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