Thursday, March 26, 2009

Real Love… Comments

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No such thing as real love…only lust and possession of power…
No such thing as true love…only control and dominion over others..
How do I feel real love if all that I feel is shame, guilt and fear?
How do I get real love if all that I feel is what he feels as well?
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valsala shan
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Abekah Emmanuel 10 September 2014

Indeed true love can be a difficult term to define. All the same, I like the structure of the poem. Nicely composed!

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*Shalimar ~ Mageswary* 31 August 2009

hi there very nice poem very impressive u are very good poet

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Howard Johnson 03 April 2009

A very enjoyable piece to read, Valsala, Thank you for sharing

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