Real Truth Poem by Tim Labbe

Real Truth

Rating: 5.0


Fixing a fence, I was
interrupted by a little boy.

'Mister, ' he asked, 'are you
a old person? '

'Well, ' I said, 'what do YOU
think? '

He replied, 'I think you're
REALLY old.'

For the truth, ask a Child.

For puffery and praise, Adults
are always eager to lie to you.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
LeeAnn Azzopardi 06 April 2022

you hit it out of the park with this one

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Tim Labbe 06 April 2022

Thank you, LeeAnn. I'm always grateful for the honesty of children. Humbled..., but grateful : )

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The truthfulness of innocence, we lose on our way to adulthood. Pertinent and beautiful poem. Skilful narration.5 *s

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Tim Labbe 06 April 2022

Thank you, once again, Unnikrishnan. It is sad how, as we grow older, lies come out of our mouths with regrettable ease.

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How true, how true. Five stars for you.

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Tim Labbe 06 April 2022

Thanks Linda. I loved it when he asked me, 'are you a old person.' Not 'are you a old man.' So unexpected. Out of the mouths of babes lol.

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