Reality Poem by Amanda Miller

Reality

Rating: 5.0


Moving sleep,
Silent scream.
Peace my child,
Only a dream.

Burdened soul.
Blackened heart.
New beginning.
An ending start.

Loving hate.
Happy sorrow.
Don't be frightened.
New tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
~ Jon London ~ 28 June 2008

Hi Amanda, Very strong piece....fast flowing emotion gives this fine poem more impact.. great stuff...........keep them coming 10 best wishes Jon.

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p.a. noushad 28 June 2008

reality of earthly life, we have to face, we cannot run away, I love this poem.

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