Amanda Miller

Rookie (5/16/90 / Alabama)

Dark Art - Poem by Amanda Miller

Pain is a dark art,
That embodies the soul.
Tears are the darts,
And your heart is the hole.

The hurt is unimaginable.
The love is all but lost.
When noone surrounds you,
You weep at all costs.

It isn't easily mastered.
Hiding the pain away,
Pretending it doesn't exist,
Lying and saying you're okay.

But you do it,
Because it's all you know.
Placing the tears aside,
Never letting them show.

Comments about Dark Art by Amanda Miller

  • (6/5/2008 1:10:00 PM)

    I really like this....I'm not going to give some flowery, ambigious bullshit compliment that people around here seem to thrive on, I'll just say that this is really good......I'm in no place to give advice but I found when I began to eschew traditional rhyme schemes that writing poetry became more fun, and it varies your work(free verse, is that what it's called? ? ?)'re 18 too! I was beginning to think everybody on this was 74 and from obscure countries...Getting feedback on this thing is tough: ( ......I like your poetry and their names....interesting...good luck with everything. (Report) Reply

    0 person liked.
    0 person did not like.
  • p.a. noushad (5/24/2008 4:23:00 AM)

    every laugh touches the tears, that is our life on the earth, when the eternity will touch us? dark art is a beautiful creation. (Report) Reply

  • Monica Lynn Mason (4/7/2008 7:42:00 AM)

    i loved embodies the full spectrum of hurt and sorrow. (Report) Reply

  • (4/2/2008 8:45:00 AM)

    very deep and full of feeling good job (Report) Reply

Read all 4 comments »

Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poem Submitted: Wednesday, April 2, 2008

[Report Error]