Poetry was her escape.
Her refuge from a world of stress and bustle,
Expressing thoughts and ideas took her to the land of dreams.
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I take the opposite view to Amanda. Your work is very good, and why put it on the site if not to appeal to this. It is really not what the work was intended to mean, but how it is understood. Yes, it can certainly be infuriating when one person tottaly misses the point, but at least it made them think enough about your work to miss the point in the first place.
All's well that ends well, Victoria. Poetry isn't written to please anybody but the author. It's only an added perk if someone else appreciates it as well.
This poem was very expressing, so real I loved it. Great Job! ! !