Friday, December 9, 2011

Reality Visit Comments

Rating: 5.0

Wall painted with confusion
In the mist of fun, I senselessly tornished my vision
Actions building a cage of night-terror
Dreams escaped with a view that sleeping is a chronic error
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Dennis Mzwakhe Pitso
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Pheko Motaung 30 January 2012

'Dreams escaped escaped with a view that sleeping is a chronic error' A majestic line in my view.An outstanding work of art.I'm happy for you

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Pheko Motaung 30 January 2012

Very very good poem.Your work rocks! Well done.Mosebetsi wa hao o motle.

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