Sunday, August 16, 2020

Realization 101...... Comments

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when we entangled
and the sensation lingers from
vine to vine
from tendrils to tendrils
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RIC BASTASA
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Kumarmani Mahakul 16 August 2020

Time comes to feel so much of love. Enlightenment motivates mind. An amazing perceptional poem is excellently penned.

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Denis Mair 16 August 2020

You have described many phases of love lately, like the biography of a living creature. In this extended series love is both an ordeal and adventure. Your phraseology is grand, but there's not a taint of artificiality. Lovely! A ten for your series!

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