Tuesday, January 31, 2006

Red Comments

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Red is the color of Earth
And Cosmic Suns Rebirth
Blue is the Color of Fire
It's as clear as a Safire
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David Darbyshire
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Ernestine Northover 31 January 2006

Nice short poem, very colourful, nice imagery. I liked it a lot. Just a thought here, I think safire, is spelt sapphire, or is your word one I don't know? I think you are talking about a gem stone. Just thought I would bring it to your attention. I hope you don't mind. Love Ernestine XXX

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