Dr subhendu kar

Gold Star - 6,669 Points (Bhubaneswar, Odissa, India)

! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***reef Of Silence***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! - Poem by Dr subhendu kar

green awaits sun to wake by warmth
dawn sees the glaze by grin of leaf
breeze touches amidst with lofty bliss
lest soul shines by own sweet breath

darkness desiccates bounty of beauty
night primly gleans tears by dews
entirety redeems by shedding sorrows
sky looks bright blue aftermath of rain

life is a mystery by reasons divine
who knows its cycle of cause and effect
yet eternity flows by streams in ages
nobody yet knows how it begins and ends

we never know reef of silence by night
heart inebriates drinking wine of breath
quest fails to find riffs of rhythm unfazed
as it flows being obsessed to reason.

Comments about ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ***reef Of Silence***! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! by Dr subhendu kar

  • Dr.subhendu Kar (1/10/2010 6:30:00 AM)

    From : Harold K Schreiberg (London/ Orleans United Kingdom; Male; 47)
    To : Dr.subhendu Kar
    Date Time : 1/10/2010 4: 18: 00 AM (GMT -6: 00)

    Subject : Re: hello,

    Good morning, dear poet friend,

    Thank you for your kind wishes
    I am sorry I haven't been able to answer more quickly but the PoemHunter site would not open!
    Your poems are full of striking images & rhythm, an excellent job
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  • (1/8/2010 10:05:00 AM)

    rich in poetic craftsmanship! ! resonant metaphors! ! ! (Report) Reply

  • Prashant Shaurya (1/7/2010 8:10:00 AM)

    what a marvelous use of metaphors sir..
    your poem takes the reader to some other place..
    brilliant and vibrant imagery..
    10+++ certainly..

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  • Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (1/4/2010 11:04:00 PM)

    The idea that only a male can achieve,
    Seems to be a most serious heresy,
    As the idea that only a male can
    Represent the Christ at the alter..ya it can never be the real fact... no discination can alter the scene...itis lovely poem with strongmessage....10

    read mine lovely life
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  • (1/2/2010 12:57:00 AM)

    You are right! Since the time of Aristotle - volumes have been written by Philosophers on 'cause and effect'! It was the Philosophers of Medieval Period who
    attributed everythng to the -'Divine Cause' and spent their life-time in justifying the same! For your poem 10!
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  • C. P. Sharma (12/29/2009 5:58:00 AM)

    Dr. Subhendu, As usual your poem is rich in poetic craftsmanship and profound in thought. It is inspiring.

    It emerges from the silence
    of the sky on mountain peaks,
    noise on its downwards journey
    mingles into the infinite sea,
    in its silent origin and merger
    let's search the life's key.
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  • (12/28/2009 4:31:00 PM)

    Excellent written metaphorical poem and I feel greatly honored in being invited to read this great poem.

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  • Linda Ori (12/27/2009 4:23:00 PM)

    'Life is a mystery by reasons divine'. We may never fully understand eternity in this lifetime, yet who knows what knowledge awaits us in the future? Perhaps we are already subconsciously aware. I like this poem, and I especially like the way you make me think about such things. I think each of us will find the answers in our own time. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, December 27, 2009

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