Monday, April 29, 2019

Reflecting Comments

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Today I went for a walk in the pouring rain
That it would fall on my face and hide all my pain
That my tears would mingle and find a way to be lost
2angels has fallen, we will find out the cost
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NiQi Deveaux
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Kostas Lagos 29 April 2019

A beautiful, vivid poem! So well written!

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Jazib Kamalvi 29 April 2019

Very impressive write, NiQi. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Kevin Patrick 29 April 2019

We take for grated all those who walk by our side Please treasure those near you, along for the ride Wise words to live by, should be a motto for all of us, when we get mad at someone we love dearly, its these words we need to keep. Thank you for sharing! .

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NiQi Deveaux

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