Reflections Comments

I really liked it good job. Lylyanna

I always believe, it is better to see after deep reflection. The view is much clearer. I loved your poem, and if you really are the age you claim, you are a rising star in poetry to be sure. Your penultimate cuplet reminds me of sudden turmoil that grief brings, freefalling! No a wanna be place for anyone, but take it from one who has been there! You do land and survive, you just have to believe in that. 10 from impressed Tai