Regrets Poem by Pensive Phoenix

Regrets



Do you know how you wound, deep into my heart?
That no melody plays like it did at the start,
You don’t need your sharp axe or your sword in scabbard,
Your words deliver the intent equally as hard,
If only you would stand uncloaked as I am,
No armour on back, no shield in thy hand,
For I cannot take you with your army and ram,
You will have to conquer me here as I am,
I won’t hide behind the mask of deceit,
I would rather go down in the glory of defeat.

But alas with a pen in hand what good can I do?
And when night-time is due,
We will retire with our thoughts,
And I will be the one, unhappy we fought.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 03 April 2009

I find this to be a rather odd and curious writing. There are parts of this that i consider to be written quite well. There are other parts that don't find as much favor with me. Overall, I would say it is a quite average poem. Inconsistent, seems to be the word here. GW62

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