Rejected Poem by Anders Lim

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Rating: 5.0


Stabbing jeers
Piercing lies
No one would look me in the eye

Life without
A single friend
A life without such is a wasted plan

Taunting faces
Filled with pride
The anguish is brewing deep down inside

So much trust
Put to vain
What do I get from each trial of pain

Red shot eyes
Bursting heart
My whole world is falling apart

Is this the truth
Is this my fate
What have I done to ignite so much hate

Take my life
Take my soul
Take every part of me that holds control

Bully the fickle
Befriend the strong
Destroy the place where I desire to belong

Break my spirit
Break my pride
There's nothing left for me to hide

Wednesday, November 26, 2008
Topic(s) of this poem: pride
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ency Bearis 27 November 2008

an instrospective write..well expressed..greatly written..A10 Ency Bearis

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