Friday, November 29, 2013

Remains Shall A Calcifying Shell Comments

Rating: 5.0

Moses, codifying commandments ten,
Used eight ‘shalls’ too many, no single ‘can’,
Sarkari babus still— on service rules—
Created cobwebs at the speed of mules:
...
Read full text

Aniruddha Pathak
COMMENTS
Dr Antony Theodore 14 April 2019

But babus seem stuck like order of day Till someone would revise the service rules— Inserting a command in all schedules: ‘And henceforth all babudom banned shall stay.’ thank u for your critical thinking. loved ur poem very much, . tony

0 0 Reply
Aniruddha Pathak 15 April 2019

Thank you for your lovely comments for a poem of 2010. And Dr Tony I noticed your long absence. Your critical comments are always welcome.

0 0
Aniruddha Pathak

Aniruddha Pathak

Godhra - Gujarat
Close
Error Success