Thursday, December 3, 2015

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Ah, it was gesticulating in a grotesque fashion
Upwards it heaved in immense passion
Its wavy arms going upwards
All the people fringing the banks
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Santosh Bakaya
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Chinedu Dike 07 December 2015

An insightful depiction of moments before disaster, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. The poem made me ponder about the casualties of TITANIC at their final moments before the wreckage. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Santosh. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Santosh Magazine 02 January 2016

Thanks so much Chinedu Dike for your wonderful comment.

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Kelly Kurt 03 December 2015

Nicely written, Santosh. Thanks

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Santosh Magazine 02 January 2016

very grateful for your comment Kelly Kurt.

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