Eduardo Torres

Rookie (12/27/93 / Carbondale Colorado)

Remember Me As A Time Of Day - Poem by Eduardo Torres

Remember Me As a Time Of Day

To you i'm just a memory
but to me your everything.
Just remember
what we used to have,


how we would spend those long nights
looking up at the stars
on a cold December night,

Walking around the school with
your hand in mine,
not caring what other people thought

Sitting at the movies
staring at others,
while we would be talking to each other

Enjoying the cold October night
with my arms around you,
at the old town park
looking up at the north star,
but actually seeing a satellite
staying up late until the clock reaches
3: 33

I know that we wont re-live those moments
but I'm asking one thing from you
to remember me as a time of day
If you don't I know I will,
cause without you,
I'm nothing.


Comments about Remember Me As A Time Of Day by Eduardo Torres

  • (4/25/2010 7:37:00 PM)


    Excellent! ! I really am a huge fan of your poetry. I really liked this one, because I understand that you are from Colorado from your bio. It adds to the whole coldness theme. I too am from a cold, northern state, Maine. This is a beautiful poem. God bless and rock on.

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, April 25, 2010



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