Remember The Days Poem by LEON SNOW

Remember The Days

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Remember the days when
we walked hand in hand
You were my other half
I believed you were my better half
We were as one
As we walked hand in hand
I feel your hand slipping throw my fingers
My arms are at full length
Stretching desperately to hold on to you
But I now feel its time, Time to let you go
And for me to walk alone.


January 2007

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jerry Hughes 09 April 2007

...nice one Liam, but slipping 'through my' fingers. I'm dsylexic so I know the difficulties you must go through at times, but it's incumbent on us to try and do better. I admire you for writing Liam, and you have my very best wishes, Jerry

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