Wednesday, October 22, 2014

Remembrance Comments

Rating: 4.8

With mud and guts up to our knees
Push on Push on! To No Man's Land we go
Our letters have been written with last goodbyes
We climb the wall
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Rose Marie Nizamuddin
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Chinedu Dike 22 October 2014

A good piece, well articulated and nicely penned. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON.

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Khairul Ahsan 22 October 2014

An excellent piece of poetry! 10/10. 'Please do not weep for me But please forgive me For whom I killed I do not know For whom I died I do not know' - For most soldiers, this is true.

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