liz caballero

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Replaced - Poem by liz caballero

i lie in my bed at night replayin
what we use to be i cant believe its over now and you have moved on without me another girl has taken
my place i hope she treats you well
id give anything to have you back
just thinking of you makes my heart cry i stare at you my feelings so strong i love everything you do
so how can you like someone
else when im still in love with you?

Topic(s) of this poem: taking


Comments about Replaced by liz caballero

  • Odey Patrick (12/18/2011 9:38:00 PM)


    nice poem liz...paints a picture i pray not to be caught in (Report) Reply

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  • (12/18/2011 8:12:00 PM)


    'replaced' gets to the point...short and sweet I like it.. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, December 17, 2011

Poem Edited: Monday, August 17, 2015


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