Thursday, May 24, 2018

Requirements Comments

Rating: 5.0

You gotta miss me when I'm gone,
And do your best to right me when I'm wrong,
You have to like wearing my clothes in the morning,
And you shouldn't constantly remind me I'm boring,
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Justin Reinalda
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Bri Edwards 25 May 2018

I don't know a sonnet from a bonnet, but i know what i like: YOUR POEM! ! only 'complaint' i can muster is...... In last line, use it's. :) i, too, have 'days', ...., i have WEEKS, when my volume is LOUUUD! ! To MyPoemList, AND i'm planning to 'borrow' for my/our (usually-monthly) showcase of poems by PH members. Authors are always acknowledged. Any questions? Pleease ask. Showcases show up in my PH list of poems. Thanks. bri :)

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Bernard F. Asuncion 25 May 2018

Justin, such a lovely sonnet....10++++

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Justin Reinalda 25 May 2018

Thank you, Bernard.

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