Rescue Poem by Jodilee Duke

Rescue

Rating: 5.0


Trees spread in me- leaves of velvety green.
Flowers flourish my eyes, like stars in the sky.
Grass fleshing out under my toes- my heart composed.

Wind dazzled with a voice- honeyed as light, perfumed seasonably bright.
First blush buds emitting a hued flood- horny for day,
granting impulsive arrays.

The leaves of me unfold bearing my deep-seated roads
provide you my heart, care for you, I will do,
as I seed the earth with my worth- blossoming turf.

Anew breath will steer us closely on behalf of a lump as it once was, branch to branch spinning away the dust that already reduced eyes view -blue sky now fresh- true.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dark Soul 09 December 2007

First the poem is amazing, full of a beatufull description for life and nature simplicity, plus well done wrote in a wonderful way that made me feel every single word, i also find no word in the poem lead to any implusive meaning which makes me feel weird for Mr Yoonoos comment but any way its a free speech here, i really loved your poem and enjoyed it, well done jodilee DS

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