Jodilee Duke

A Smile

Purple, green and blue
come on threw
bring along
your friends too,
shower what is true,
create the world
a rainbow.

Poem Submitted: Thursday, July 31, 2008

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Comments about A Smile by Jodilee Duke

  • Uriah Hamilton (7/12/2009 2:27:00 PM)

    a fun sweet poem. A summery read, it seems to me.

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  • Ron Flowers (8/21/2008 11:41:00 AM)

    A very nice read.

    Ron

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  • Brooke Moran (8/13/2008 1:39:00 PM)

    lol this is cute. ha ha

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  • Anthony O. (8/12/2008 4:24:00 PM)

    a very nice idea! short and sweet but at the same time also powerful.

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  • rohit sapra (8/9/2008 2:27:00 PM)

    This poem is really nice as your thoughts about a smile are really very true and smile sometimes can be brighter than a rainbow as its the only thing in this world which is free of cost although holds the value of being the precious if it's understood.

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  • Rehab Helmy (7/31/2008 4:55:00 PM)

    a simple great choice of words
    keep going on and good luck

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  • silver phoenix (7/31/2008 4:50:00 PM)

    Hey great work, simple but i like it,
    Please check some of mine too, perhaps youll like it.Rate it and comment if you can, constructive criticism is also welcome, if youre into small poems please read two.
    If youre more into complex poems check number 2 or 3.
    Thankyou,
    Kilian

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