Thursday, May 25, 2006

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I cannot wait for him to return,
With raven hair, and skin of gold

I cannot wait for his love tonoght,
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christina henry
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Goldy Locks 25 May 2006

i thought this was excellent, Christina. this & your sonnet you've put out today - so romantic. i dont think the last two lines fit in with this, however. they don't do the rest of it justice. good stuff, keep it up. Sus.

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