The ice hung from the station building at Dachau camp
The sun struggled to light the scene in the wet and damp
In the distance a steam train whistle blows announcing its arrival
As the SS guards stamp their feet in their cold revival
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The gypsy's curse, being an integral part of the poem, lacked poetic gypsy flavor and should also be accented with quotation marks- -Create a stanza for her- -give her a voice. Cool idea for a poem, and not too shabby.