Subbaraman N V

Freshman - 864 Points (31st July 1941 / Karaikkudi - Tamilnadu- India)

Rhyme And Rhythm Or Theme And Content* - Poem by Subbaraman N V

Sure rhyme and rhythm always great
Music and sound sure a treat!
Poem writing lovely art
Love it is to poet's heart
Grammar and rules play a part!
Theme and content must be smart!
Feelings and emotions sure
Make the poem simply pure!
Content no doubt adds splendor
Message gives it more grandeur!
As I write this with great care
Bhagwat Pada comes to share
"bhaja govindaṃ bhaja govindaṃ
govindaṃ bhaja mūdhamate |
samprāpte sannihite kāle
nahi nahi rakṣati dukriṅkaraṇe"

Topic(s) of this poem: art

Form: Anaphora

Poet's Notes about The Poem

a thought that inspires not to be so sensitive about grammar but be sensitive to theme and content.

Comments about Rhyme And Rhythm Or Theme And Content* by Subbaraman N V

  • Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (1/11/2015 11:22:00 PM)

    Interesting mix in subtly introducing Hindi into the work...Personally, I am not an endorser or supporter of rhmsical poetics, however some poems simply scream out for rhyme...This poem does ~FjR~ (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, January 11, 2015

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