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* A Solemn Day!

Rating: 2.9

Great Indian Republic Sixty
Sure going fast and hefty!
On this day - a solemn day
Services displayed might and strength
To all in the world - breadth and length!
To the pride of many and the pain of a few
First Lady unfurled the majestic hue!
Kazak Prez. witnessed all anew!
On Rajpath stood the Nation's pride
Ten widows and a mother proud!

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Surya . 04 June 2009

an announcement from one who saw the spectacle first hand.very nice.posted 10 surya

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Reshma Ramesh 07 February 2009

great write sir..................well penned

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Eddie Roa 02 February 2009

A fine chronicle of a day of national importance (I Day- Independence Day? , R Dayi Republic Day?) A bit like Whitman.

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Avinash Thakur 27 January 2009

very thoughtful write....I appreciate your effort

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

A Great write. Well written. Loved reading it.

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Saiom Shriver 31 March 2012

'Like water I came and like wind I go! ' is a magnificent line in a grea poem

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Loved this vivid poetic. write. You captured in essence all of R-day all to well. Penned creatively! ; D

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Gita Ashok 08 June 2010

Excellent work of art. Your sharp sense of observation, general awareness, attention to detail and of course creative packaging deserve a special mention here. While reading it, I imagined I was watching all the events you have described here on R-day in my mind's television. What about a repeat performance for the I-Day, too? Looking forward to it eagerly. Undoubtedly, a 10++++++++ here.

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Marieta Maglas 30 August 2009

excellent narrative poem, thank you for sharing......10+++++++

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