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the cry of a rooster
carries the first sun-rays
over the hill into the day
streaming the rumble mumble
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Femia Jantzen
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V P Mahur
14 March 2014
Dear Femina, I liked the quickness and speed expressed in this poem. Nice one! I wish I could read more of your poems during the coming days. If you wish, you can read some of my poems on Nature and send your views on them. hope for your favourable response. Thanks!
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3/15/2026 3:34:17 AM # 1.0.0
the cry of a rooster carries the first sun-rays..streaming in the rumble mumble you have amazingly perceived the imagery. This poem is very brilliantly penned. The cry of rooster is heard. 10