Monday, November 12, 2018

Risk Breaker Comments

Rating: 5.0

The world spins in circles when I look into your eyes,
The butterflies,
It screams and cries,
And I am left awake,
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Aven Arryan
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Jazib Kamalvi 14 November 2018

A good start with a nice poem, Avary Nearn. You may like to read my poem, Love And Iust. Thank you.

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Dave Walker 13 November 2018

We have to take chances in this world, we only get one life, So take the chance now.

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Aven Arryan 13 November 2018

Point well taken lol

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Bhagabat Prasad Hotta 12 November 2018

Beautiful poem.....so nice.. ..10+++++++

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Aven Arryan 13 November 2018

Thank you so much :)

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