RIVERS Poem by Yu Jian

RIVERS



there are many rivers in the mountains where I grew up
in deep gorges they flow
they rarely catch a glimpse of sky
there are no expansive sails hoisted high over their surfaces
nor huge flocks of river gulls drawn on by boat-songs
it's only when you've climbed endless ridges and hills
that you hear this river sound
it's only on rafts made of great tree-trunks lashed together
that you dare ride upon these waves
some areas will stay forever unknown to humankind
the freedom of those places belongs to the eagles alone
in the rainy season the waters turn brutal
gale winds on the high plateau push boulders down into valleys
mud dyes the rivers red
as if the mountains were actually bleeding
only when it's calm
do you see the plateau's bulging veins
those people who live on either side of these rivers
may never come to know of one another's existence
but wherever you go in the place I grew up in
you will here people talking about these rivers
as if discussing their gods

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Susan Williams 30 April 2019

mud dyes the rivers red as if the mountains were actually bleeding only when it's calm do you see the plateau's bulging veins- - - - - - - you have a magic pen, it writes the best descriptives ever! ! ! ! I have read 5 of your poems tonight and every one of them is a starry-eyed 10- - - very very well-written

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Chinedu Dike 26 April 2019

An insightful descriptive verse, well articulated and nicely penned with conviction. A beautiful creation. Thanks for sharing, Yu.

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