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Romeo & Juliet

Rating: 3.2

The classic story
of when a boy met a girl
their love led to death.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 20 April 2005

not really a haiku. a haiku needs something more subtle and there should be mysterious swing of feeling when reading it which i dont get here. in fact, you are just stating a fact. perhaps something like this is more proper another pair romeo and juliet side by side their dead bodies lie

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