not really a haiku. a haiku needs something more subtle and there should be mysterious swing of feeling when reading it which i dont get here. in fact, you are just stating a fact. perhaps something like this is more proper
another pair
romeo and juliet
side by side their dead bodies lie
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not really a haiku. a haiku needs something more subtle and there should be mysterious swing of feeling when reading it which i dont get here. in fact, you are just stating a fact. perhaps something like this is more proper another pair romeo and juliet side by side their dead bodies lie