Run Poem by Aamir Hussain

Run

Rating: 5.0


Dimness has swallowed
the last remains of your day

You walked to this moment,
all twenty eight miles,
quivering, defenceless,
ambling through broken things, barefoot.

You have wounded the asphalt
with the tenderness of your thoughts
You, the enemy of happiness
How did you arrive here?

'Everything will be alright', I said.
'I will set it right
This fleeting thing
and this foggy road
If only i could
roll it like a carpet,
grasp it under my arm
and run away! '

Run
Monday, November 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: evening,life,melancholy,road
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 24 November 2016

Wow such a great intense metaphorical poem. We all feel like running away sometimes so this poem expresses that in an amazing way. Kudos. U r most welcome to comment under my latest poem too.

0 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success