Tuesday, March 10, 2009

'Rust To Dust' Comments

Rating: 5.0

Clocking time idly, cargo boats lie open
To sky, emptied and hungry, their restocked
Trade held in containers, secured and roped.
Standing amazed I watched them stowed and locked
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Fay Slimm
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Bob Gibson 03 August 2009

The box boats moored alongside dock container cranes relinquish stock then reloaded five high or more bound for a foreign shore The old Keep guarding the Carrick Road Pendennis Castle, King Henry's abode mock battles for the tourist shilling its granite walls find less than thrilling

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Fiona Davidson 10 March 2009

I have visited Pedennis castle Fay (once got stuck on the narrow staircase too becuase of a fear of falling) and you have described it so well here...brought memories flooding back of time spent in your lovely part of England...and yes the atmosphere inside the castle is awsome...exceptional write here...thank you...Fi 10++++

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Kris Smith 10 March 2009

Wonderful write here Fay capturing the majesty of your beautiful county, thanks Chris 10 +++

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Andrew mark Wilkinson 10 March 2009

If the stones could speak, would they weep... Andy 10

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anurag duggal 10 March 2009

Coyly grin. The granite utters not a word. lovely line wonderful write Fay...

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Fay Slimm

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