Ruthless World Poem by Shouvik Ahmed

Ruthless World

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When the sun rises, I am not there
When the sun sets I am not there
When the birds fly, I am not there
When the tiger roars, I am not there

When u were sick, I was there
When U were hurt I was there
When u were alone I was there
When u need me I was there

But when I was alone no was there
When I was hurt no one was there
When I was sick no one was there
Is this is the world meant to be?

Friday, March 23, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: cruelty,world
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 25 March 2018

A nice poetic imagination, Shouvik. You may like to read my poem, Love and Iust. Thanks

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Dr Antony Theodore 23 March 2018

When u were sick, I was there When U were hurt I was there When u were alone I was there When u need me I was there....the pain of being in this world...... selflessness and selfishness. caring and not being cared for......... contrasts of life..... thank you very much dear poet. tony

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